pls dedicate a poem for....bcoz weve already made a song...a poem should be good

I'm still trying to think of one hee hee. Not really familiar with poems

Evening lights and a starry surprise
a mysterious lady appears in disguise
her eyes and warmth covers my cold
i wish my heart was much more bold
a streak of light traverses down her hair
as she moves under the moonlight air
the scent of daisies stick to my clothes
a lust for this woman sat on one rose
sweet and sour like a candy tart
this is the last line but it's for her heart

Woww... I love your poem kyosho it is really descriptive and has a good rhyme pattern too!! I hope you coud write one for my English class he hee ...

whoa! kyosho, thats really something... it flows really well. good job! good job!